Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 199
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Irene gawked at him; she suspected as much, but hearing Ethan confirm it was mind–boggling.
“What?” She asked in a breathy whisper. “She’s using my father to get
pet to v
you?”
“Yes, of course she is,” he said, rolling his eyes. “Why else would she be hanging around him like this? It’s pathetic if you ask me. She’s flirted with me so much since she started working here and I keep telling her that I’m not interested. She’s not the person you thought she was, Irene. You should be careful around her.”
Irene knew this, but hearing it was different. Anger coursed through her; she started to hate Judy just a little more and now her poor Ethan was a victim to her
Ethan closed the gap between them, seeing this as his opportunity to comfort her. He wrapped her in his arms and kept her close to his body. His wolf wasn’t exactly happy about this… but he needed to comfort Irene if he wanted his plans to work out.
“I love yo
you, “Ethan murmured, kissing the top of her head. “I’m so sorry that you got hurt. But I promise, I’m not hiding anything more from you.”
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Irene nodded against his chest and let out a breath of relief. She felt better after this talk, she now knew who her friends were and who were her enemies and Judy was no friend.
Judy’s POV
Gavin pressed the warm cloth to my nose, wiping away the excess blood on my face. We hadn’t spoken since Irene and Ethan went upstairs. I was hoping that she would have told Ethan to get lost and not take him back. But that didn’t seem to be the case; the moment she took his hand, I knew she was going to forgive him. I was honestly surprised Gavin was even allowing that to happen; he knew what scum Ethan was. Yet, he’s still letting his daughter marry him.
“Were you the one who told her?” Gavin asked, breaking the silence between us.
I looked up at him, surprised by the question.
“No, of course not,” I told him. “I wouldn’t do that. I wouldn’t want to hurt her like that.”
“Then, how did she find out?” Gavin asked, his tone accusatory.
I frowned at him.
“I don’t know,” I said slowly. “I have no idea how she found out, but it wasn’t from me.”
He studied my face for a moment before nodding and returning his attention to the blood on my face.
“You shouldn’t have fought with her.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...