Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 186
Chapter 0186
Harper rolled her eyes.
“Don’t you ladies have anything better to do?” She asked. Folding her arms across her chest and narrowing her eyes.
Chester grinned.
“Now Harper, no need to be jealous,” he said, nudging her shoulder. “You know you are still my favorite.”
“I’m not jealous,” she retorted in a growl as she turned to face him. “But flirting while at work has always been frowned upon.”
“That’s not what you were saying the other night,” he said in a soft and breathy whisper, though the rest of us could hear him clearly.
My eyes grew wide as I watched Harper’s face turn different shades of pink and red. Had they slept together the other night? I wondered what the lure was here… something certainly interesting was happening in front of my eyes and I was way too curious about it.
“We weren’t working,” she said through her teeth. “Ineed to run to the store. I’ll be back.”
She turned on her heel and hurried out of the kitchen looking mortified. I turned to Chester who was laughing and shaking his head.
“She embarrasses so easily. I don’t get why. It was only sex,” he said, still shaking his head. “It wasn’t that big of a deal.”
I folded my arms across my chest and watched as he maneuvered his way around the kitchen, cooking in a delicate fashion.
“Maybe to you, it wasn’t a big deal,” I told him. “But did you ever think that maybe it was a big deal to her?”
He paused for a moment to look at me over his shoulders.
“It’s not my fault she went back on her word,” he said, shrugging. “We said no strings attached. We were only scratching each other’s itch. Nothing more to it.”
“Is that the kind of guy you are?” I asked him, raising my brows. “The guy who has mindless sex that doesn’t mean anything?
He corked an eyebrow up at me and put his hands on the counter, leaning so close to me that his lips would be on mine if he were to move another inch.
“Want to find out?” He asked, his voice dropping sultry.
Just as I was about to lean back and away from him, the door slammed shut, making Chester step away from me by instinct.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...