Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 185
Chapter 0185
Judy’s POV
Tonight was the first night that Gavin had actually stayed the night with me. I have been here for a few days, and usually after our time together, he leaves after I fall asleep. I wasn’t expecting to wake up and find him still in my room, sleeping in my bed with his shirt off. It seems he put his pants back on though.
My heart skipped a beat at the sight of him. I wasn’t displeased that he was still by my side, but a little confused. I ran my fingers down his back, feeling the warmth spread across my body at the feel of him. I wanted to wrap myself back in his arms and stay like that all day, but I knew with the movie industry filming in his pack, he was going to be incredibly busy
He stirred in his sleep and when his eyes opened, I walked with bated breath for him to jump out of bed and run for the hills. I thought that maybe he didn’t mean to fall asleep in my bed and that he would regret it. But when a small smile lit up his face, my heart started to race heavily in my chest.
“Good morning,” he said, rolling onto his back, and showcasing his incredible abs. My mouth went dry at the sight of him, and I swallowed the lump in my throat.
“Good morning,” I replied. “I didn’t expect you to still be here this morning.”
He stretched before he sat up, running his fingers through his disheveled hair. It should be illegal to look that good.
“I was tired,” he confessed. “Yesterday was a lot.”
“Did you meet Skyla?” I asked him, biting my lower lip. I didn’t love the fact that he was hanging out with a supermodel actress all day, but I knew it wasn’t something I could tell him, so I kept biting my lower lip and staring down at my hands.
“Yeah,” he murmured. “She’s interesting. I have to oversee their filming today.”
I nodded.
“I’ll be tutoring Matt later, so if you want to meet up… I suggested, my cheeks burning.
He turned so he could look at me, his eyes dark with lust and it made my heart skip a beat again.
“I’ll keep that in mind,” he replied in a sultry tone. “But I’ll be really busy today, so I’m not sure if I’ll be able to stop by later.”
I nodded, already guessing that.
He slipped out of bed and grabbed his pants off the ground.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...