Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 153
Chapter 0153
Judy’s POV
This was the scariest moment of my life. When Matt took a bite of the sandwich and suddenly, he was dropping to the ground, I had no idea what to do. I had never been put in a position like this before. His entire face turned red and blew–up like a balloon as he grabbed his throat; it was clear that he couldn’t breathe.
The only thing I knew at that moment was he needed an Epl–Pen, but Irene was completely frozen and did not hear a word I was saying. Before I knew what was happening, Gavin was bursting through the room. I hadn’t even noticed a mald was present until she followed him in; I was relieved because she went to get him without hesitation, and he seemed to have had an Epi–pen hidden in the parlor desk.
When Matt started to breathe again, my entire body relaxed, and I allowed the tears to flow down my cheeks.
“Call an ambulance,” Gavin growled at the maid. She nodded and rushed away to do as he ordered.
Gavin grabbed Matt out of my lap and cradled him in his own lap. He was breathing on his own now, despite the fact that his face was still very swollen. His eyes were closed too, and I wondered if he had passed out. I leaned against the couch, willing my heart to slow down and stop hammering against my ribcage.
“Who fed him peanut butter?” Gavin said through his teeth, his eyes red with fury.
I glanced
at him with a frown; he was glaring at me, like I had somehow did something wrong.
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“W…what?” I asked him, my voice coming out as a squeak.
“I asked you, who fed him peanut butter?”
I opened my mouth to reply, but Irene spoke first.
“Judy made him lunch,” she said quickly, pointing to the sandwich that was now on the ground. Gavin grabbed the sandwich and sniffed it; his pupils dilating as his aura darkened,
“Didn’t Taylor go over these things with you? I thought you were given a list of his allergies,” Gavin asked, his tone rising.
“1…” I wasn’t sure what to say; I was dumbfounded. I didn’t put peanut butter in his sandwich. I knew he was deathly allergic to it. I would never be so careless like that… but I couldn’t really explain how the peanut butter got into the sandwich I had made for him.
“Dad, you have to do something,” Irene said, as tears fell down her cheeks. “She almost killed him. She can’t be safe to be around here…”
My heart fell deep into my stomach. I stared at her with disbelief. She was crying, but I could tell there was more to it. She was playing Gavin like a fiddle right now and I was on the other end of this cruel joke.
Why was she suddenly doing this to me? I thought she said we were okay.
I could hear the ambulance in the distance. Matt groaned, bringing Gavin’s attention to him. He wiped strays of damp hair out of his face, cradling him tighter in his arms.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...