Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 152
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When she found the Epi–pen in its usual place, she grabbed it and put it into her back pocket, knowing she was going to need it for what she was about to do.
“I’ve missed talking to you,” Judy continued as she spread the red jam on the slice of bread. “I truly do think of you as a friend, Irene.”
So, Irene wasn’t the only one accustomed to lying. There was no way Judy thought of her as a friend. Irene felt sick to her stomach listening to her lies, but he forced a smile on her pretty face and nodded.
“I agree completely. We’ll have to get together soon for a real chat,” Irene suggested,
Judy smiled, looking more relaxed than when she had first come into the kitchen. She applied another. layer of jam before putting the other slice of bread on top. She cut the sandwich in a triangle, which even Irene knew was her brother’s favorite shape.
Judy walked across the kitchen in search of chips.
“I believe Matt’s favorite chips are in the bottom cabinet,” Irene said as she made her way across the kitchen and around the counters, behind Judy’s back judy searched the bottom cabinet for the chips just as Irene grabbed the peanut butter out of the top cabinet.
“I don’t see them,” Judy said, sighing.
“Oh, maybe they are on the top shelf,” Irene said, chuckling.
Judy closed the bottom cabinet and then started to search the top cabinet while Irene got the lid of the peanut butter off and hid the container behind her back.
Judy finally found the chips and opened them. She walked back to the sandwich and placed a handful of chips on the plate.
“Oh, juice!” Judy said as she closed the bag of chips. “Te likes apple juice, right?”
Irene nodded.
“Yes,” she answered. “It’s in the fridge and his favorite Star Wars cup is in the top shelf above the
stove.”
Judy nodded thoughtfully and turned her back towards Irene so she could search for the required items. Irene took that time to stick her finger in the peanut butter and open one of sandwich triangles. She smeared peanut butter across the jam and then did the same thing with the other side.
When she heard the cabinet door shutting, Irene spun around and breathed out a sigh of relief when she saw that Judy was still not paying attention to her. She was pouring the juice in a cup for Matt.
Once she finished, she put the juice away, which Irene took that time to lick the excess peanut butter, and a bit of jam, off her fingers to clean the evidence.
Judy walked back to the plate and her eyes met Irenes.
“Are you sure we are okay?” She asked.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...