Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 150
Chapter 0150
“It’s part of the job,” she murmured. “But exhausting So, seriously What’s so important? You sounded urgent on the phone.”
I sighed and ran my fingers through my hair, tugging at the ends.
“My mom is selling the house,” I blurted.
“What??” Nan gasped. “Why would she do that? She loves that house. Her and your father worked hard in the beginning to get to that house. She always used to tell us stories about it.”
“I know,” I told her, closing my eyes. “But somehow, thans‘ parents convinced her to sell the house and move in with them until she’s back on her feet.”
“Those conniving assholes,” she hissed. “They did this on purpose!”
“I’m well aware,” I murmured, rolling my eyes at the very thought.
“So, what are you going to do?” Nan asked. “You can’t live there. Is your mother that gullible?”
“Apparently she is,” I sighed. “She told me we are moving in a couple of days.”
“You can’t be
and your wolf.”
rious, Judy,” Nan groaned. “You living in the Cash household will be so damaging to you
“I can’t live there, Nan,” I told her, dropping my voice even lower. “My mother is adamant about it and even said if I’m not on board, then I can find somewhere else to live.”
“So, what are you going to do?” Nan asked.
I was quiet for a moment as I chewed my bottom lip.
“I was kind of hoping I could crash on your couch until I can figure something out?” I asked her, holding my breath until she answered.
After a beat of silence, she finally replied, heaping a large sigh.
“Oh, Judy. I would love to have you stay with me, but my landlord is a complete asshole. I signed a contract stating that I won’t have anyone staying here for more than a couple days…” she told me sadly. “I’m so sorry…
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Disappointment filled me. She was my only hope. I truly will have to live with Ethan’s family. My entire stomach turned into a nervous pit, and I fought the urge to cry.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...