Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 149
Chapter 0149
“Okay,” I finally said after a beat of silence. “We don’t need to talk about this any further.”
“Can you leave now?” She murmured. “I’m really tired.”
I nodded and started to leave, but then I paused and glanced over my shoulder at her.
“I thought you’d like to know that Ethan is sleeping in a guest room. We found him passed out in the bar and it looked like a prostitute was about to take advantage of him.”
Irene’s face paled immediately, and I could practically hear her heart thumping out of her chest.
“What?” She gasped. “Why didn’t you say something sooner? I need to go see him,” she said as she ran towards the doorway.
I didn’t stop her, but I did call after her once she was in the hallway.
“Irene,” I said, halting her movements. “I love you. I Hope you know that.”
She studied me for a moment before she nodded. She didn’t say anything as she turned and quickly hurried to find Ethan.
I sighed. There was no getting through to her.
I was surprised to see that Judy returned the next evening to train Matt; I honestly thought she would have called in sick after our last encounter. I was pleased to see her though; I wanted to tell her that I was sorry for what I had said in the heat of the moment.
Then again, it wasn’t my place to make her see reason. I decided to give her a bit of space this evening, but I admittedly watched from afar with my wolf itching to get closer. I kept my footing though, unable to take my eyes off her.
Irene and Ethan spent the entire day together; Ethan seemed to have forgotten what had happened last night and Irene was just pleased to have him by her side. I’ve noticed there was some tension between Judy and Irene earlier and I wasn’t sure where it was coming from. Irene kept glancing at Judy whenever they were in the same area, and I swear I saw her giving Judy a dirty look.
I thought they were friends… what had happened?
Judy grabbed her phone out of her bag and frowned when she saw the screen. She glanced down at Matt and said something to him. He nodded and started to practice on her own while Judy went to take a phone call.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...