Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 146
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Chapter 0146
Judy’s POV
For the last couple of days, the pain continued only at night. It would go on until the morning, but with Gavin holding me almost every night, it wasn’t as bad I was able to get through it. It made no sense because I’ve noticed Irene around the mansion, she’s been avoiding me… ignoring me when I say hi, or pretending that I’m not around. She spends most of her time in her room alone though and Ethan hasn’t come by once to check on her.
However, the pain intensified. I visited with the pack doctor, and he told me the same thing Gavin and I had already guessed… my fated mate was having sex with another woman and it was damaging to my body and wolf.
After the third day of excruciating pain, Gavin sent someone out to get Ethan. He had to answer for his crimes. He was cheating on Irene, and it was painfully obvious. The only one who wasn’t aware of it was Irene.
Unless she was aware of it and that was why she kept herself in her room.
“We found him,” Taylor said as he walked into the villa, his arms folded across his chest as he motioned over his shoulder. Ethan was being dragged in by a couple of guards and he looked completely out of it. It was disgusting to look at and it made me recoil. I couldn’t believe I was once so in love with this fool. “He was passed out at the pub.”
Gavin curled his lip in disgust as he stared down at Ethian.
“So, that’s what you’ve been doing nightly? Going to the pub? And then What? You find a woman and take her home?” He asked, his voice filled with a rage had never heard before.
Ethan lifted his head to look at Gavin… it was like he didn’t even register who was standing in front of him, or where he even was.
“Why am I here?” He murmured incoherently. “Where’s Daphnee?”
Taylor ran his fingers thought his hair, looking uncomfortable.
“There was a prostitute with him, and it looked like she was about to take him out of the bar before we got there,” he explained.
I raised my brows and glared down at the man who used to be my mate.
“A prostitute Ethan?” I asked him, dumbfounded, “Seriously? You are better than that…”
At least I thought so. But now I wasn’t so sure… he had done some pretty awful things… but cheating on Irene with a prostitute was disgusting. I shook my head at him, unable to look at him any longer.
“How could you do that to her…” I asked, tears filling my eyes as I thought about how hurt she would be if she were to find out about this.
“How dare you hurt my daughter,” Gavin said through his teeth. “I had given you enough chances, Ethan Cash…”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...