Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 145
Chapter 0145
She wrapped her legs around his waist as he deepened the kiss. He nibbled on her bottom lip.
“Let’s get out of here,” he murmured against her.
She nodded and Ethan called one of his subordinates to come pick them up because he was far too drunk to drive. He took her back to his house and they had sex all night long.
Judy’s POV
Pain coursed through my entire body starting with the mark on my neck. My body trembled violently, and tears streamed down my cheeks. I Irad felt pain starting in my neck before, whenever Ethan kissed Irene, but it was never anything like this.
This was a whole new level of pain that I wasn’t used to and I never wanted to feel again. My entire body felt as if it was being electrocuted. My wolf was howling in despair, and I couldn’t get the noise out of my
ears.
Gavin ran out of the bathroom with a warm cloth; me waking up screaming scared him, and he rushed to the bathroom right away. The loss of contact from his warm body made it all feel worse but once he returned, I felt a little of the tension and pain subsiding.
“It’s okay,” he breathed, placing the warm cloth over my head. I reached up and grabbed his shoulders, pulling him into me. I needed him close; for whatever reason, his body made the pain more bearable.” Ssshhh…” he breathed, kissing the top of my head as his arms wrapped around me.
“It hurts…” I whimpered, my fingers trembling as I scratched at my neck.
‘Stop doing that,” he said through his teeth, grabbing at my hand as he replaced it with the warm cloth. “You’ll hurt yourself even more.”
“I don’t understand what’s happening…” I said as tears flowed evenly down my cheeks. “I’ve never felt pain like this before… only when Ethan kisses Irene… but it’s never been this bad.”
He was quiet for a moment, and I could tell he was thinking intently about something.
“Do you think they could be doing more than kissing? Gavin finally asked after a long silence.
I sucked in a sharp intake of breath; could that be what’s wrong? Could Ethan and Irene be having sex and that’s why I was facing this severe pain coming from the mark on my neck?
I could hear my wolf whimpering at the very thought. My body continued to tremble in Gavin’s arms, and he held me even tighter.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...