Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 129
Chapter 0129
Judy’s POV
“Hey, Dad! Are you going to watch us practice again today?” Matt asked eagerly as Gavin joined us in the parlor.
It had been a couple of weeks since our arrangement and things have been going way better than I thought. A few times, Ethan had almost caught us. We old ourselves that we needed to be more careful around the house and maybe keep the display of affection to a minimum during the daylight. But he still picks me up from college and brings me to his Villa. At least twice a week I’ve been sleeping here, in Gavin’s bed, but he takes me home early in the morning so nobody would suspect anythin
The only thing that truly changed in front of others was the fact that Gavin now joined Matt and me during our training sessions outside, and sometimes even in the parlor during our academic tutoring sessions. Matt has loved it and I loved seeing that smile on his face. He hasn’t gotten in trouble at school since Gavin started to pay more attention to him and could tell his spirit has been up.
“Would that be okay?” Gavin asked, sitting in one of the nearby chairs.
“Yes!” Matt said happily, a smile lighting up his face.
Gavin smiled at the young boy before his eyes lifted and met mine; my heart skipped a beat.
“Would that be okay with you?” He asked me, raising his brows playfully. He was getting a rise out of the fact that he was making me blush. “I wouldn’t want to interrupt or anything
“I have no complaints, Mr. Landry. But I might put you to work,” I told him, winking as I stood to my feet. I turned to Matt who was grinning from ear to ear “Want to practice what I taught you the other day?”
He jumped to his feet and laughed.
“Yes,” he answered. He grabbed my hand and then grabbed Gavin’s hand, pulling him to his feet. “Let’s go!”
We followed Matt outside, letting him drag us along. I glanced up at Gavin and saw him smiling; it was refreshing to see him smiling like this and it did something to my insides.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...