Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 128
Chapter 0128
She was quiet for a moment as she took a sip of lier own coffee.
“There’s nothing wrong with being friends. I mean, lie has to understand that your fated mate left you for another woman only recently. You are still heartbroken, and your wolf is healing,” she told me. “You can’t be too hard on yourself, and he can’t be too hard on you.”
I bit my lip and stared down at the brown liquid, my cheeks flushing at the memory.
“Why do I feel like there’s more to the story?” She suddenly asked, taking in my sour expression.
“Because there is,” I murmured, pecking up at her through my lashes. “He was so angry, Nan. I was so scared, and I tried to get away. Things were sald… and lines were crossed.”
“Lines were crossed?” She asked and I could feel her rising irritation. “Did he hurt you??”
I chewed the inside of my cheek, not able to say the words.
“OH, my Goddess!” She nearly screamed. “He did, didn’t he?!”
“Not so loud, Nan!” I pleaded, grabbing her arm to settle her down. “I don’t want this to get out.”
“I’m going to fucking kill that asshole!” She hissed and was seconds away from standing up, but I pulled her back down, not wanting her to make any stupid decisions.
“Gavin is already dealing with it…”
She froze and stared at me with wide eyes.
“Gavin? Gavin Landry?” She asked.
I nodded.
“He saw me walking last night and he pulled over to give me a ride…” I told her. It was half the truth b I wasn’t going to tell her the entire story. “He figured out what happened, and he promised me that Walter won’t hurt me again.”
She raised her brows and then a smile tipped the corner of her lips.
“Alpha Gavin Landry is protecting you?” She asked.
My cheeks blushed and I stared down at my hands.
“Yes,” I answered, not able to look her in the eyes.
“Why do I feel like there’s more to it-”
“I have to get to my next class,” I said quickly, jumping to my feet. “Thanks for the coffee.”
I grabbed my bag and my coffee and hurried towards the doorway.
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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...