Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 114
Chapter 0114
I grabbed the flyer and frowned at it. Of course, I’ve heard of this Gala. They have it every few years and it’s the most popular event that includes all the big packs in the area. Only the rich and famous attend these Galas. The most famous will fly in for an event like this. But you have to be invited in order to get through the doors.
“Only anybody who is anybody will be there,” Nan continued as she gazed lovingly at the flyer.
“And since when are we anybody?” I asked her, raising my eyebrows.
“Not “we“. You.”
I sighed.
“Since when am I anybody?” I rephrased.
“Um, since you started dating the world’s second–sexiest badass bachelors,” she told me, sitting beside
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me.
I rolled my eyes at her words.
“Now that’s a mouthful,” I teased. “But seriously, Nan. I only went on a couple of dates with Walter. I wouldn’t exactly say we are serious. At least not serious enough for him to take me to this thing
“You literally kissed,” she reminded me, nudging me with her shoulder.
Yeah, we kissed. But it wasn’t mind–blowing and left me on weak knees like my kiss with Gavin. I couldn’t tell Nan that I kissed Gavin though and I certainly couldn’t tell her about last night. I bit my lower lip, hoping she didn’t notice the sudden blush in my cheeks.
“You are literally blushing thinking about it,” she chuckled. “You can’t tell me you don’t like him.”
I shrugged casually.
“He’s okay, I guess,” I murmured.
would
“Just okay? Don’t be ridiculous. He’s gorgeous and any kill to be going on dates and kissing him,” she told me. “He’s going to invite you to this thing. You have to say yes, Judy.‘
“If he invites me then I will,” I tell her. “But until then, I’m not going to wait for him or get my hopes up.”
She sighed and leaned against the tree as she continued to gaze at the flyer.
“I wish I could be so lucky,” she breathed.
As I packed up my books, shoving them into my backpack, I stood to my feet and shouldered my bag,
“Well, I’ll send you pictures,” I said sarcastically.
“You better,” she replied.
I laughed and shook my head. It was ridiculous to think he would invite me to this thing and even if he did, I’m not really sure if he would go. I wasn’t going to tell her that though; I didn’t need to give her
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...