Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 113
Chapter 0113
Gavin’s POV
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There was a hopeful boyish quality about my nephew and the thought of poking that bubble with a needle didn’t sit right with me. But I also didn’t want to get his hopes up. It shouldn’t matter to me if Judy decided to be his girlfriend. She was her own woman, and she could do whatever she wanted. It was clear to me that she didn’t want me in that kind of way, she only wanted to keep our relationship professional, which was probably for the best.
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But the thought of her being touched by another man eft me feeling nothing but resentment and anger. I had to brush that thought out of my head though; it was my business. She made her choice and now I had to make mine.
“I can’t answer for her,” I finally settled on. “You’ll have to ask her for yourself.”
I turned on that note and walked into the kitchen without saying another word. Irene and Matt were
already seated at the dining table and Walter walked in moments after I did. I sat at the head of the table and Walter took a seat beside Irene.
“I’m so glad you can join us for dinner, Dad. I didn’t think you’d be here,” Irene said with a fond smile
“I’m surprised you aren’t with Ethan,” I replied, putting my cloth napkin on my lap.
She shrugged and glanced at her phone which was beside her on the table.
“He’s been busy today,” she said softly. “After I got back from the hospital earlier, he had to catch up on, some work. He spent the entire night with me. He was such a gentleman.”
I looked around her face and saw that the bruise was almost completely gone, and she was looking a lot better. I was relieved to see that; when I saw her at the hospital this morning after I left the Villa, she was exhausted and still so scared. Spending time with Ethan must have helped her mentally recover.
“He was so noble last night, Daddy. I wished I could have remembered him fighting those rogues, but I passed out. I couldn’t believe he came to save me… he must really love me,” Irene continued to gush. “I can’t believe I ever doubted him.”
“You doubted him?” Walter asked, raising his brows.
“Only for a minute,” she admitted. “I thought he might have feelings for someone else. But I think I was just paranoid.”
“Who would he have feelings for?” Walter asked. “Who could possibly be better than you, Rena?”
Irene blushed and glanced at her empty plate.
“It’s not important,” she murmured.
It was clear she didn’t want to say; I already knew who she was thinking of. Before anyone could say anything else, the maids were bringing in the food.
“It all looks so good!” Irene gushed.
“I can’t wait to eat,” Walter chimed in.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...