Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 74
Chapter 0074
Judy’s POV
“And he knows that you aren’t his biological child?” asked, glancing down at a sleeping Matthew.
Gavin nodded.
“Yes,” he said softly. “He remembers his time with his mother. It wasn’t good and he often still has nightmares. He started to call me dad a few years ago after he started living with me.‘
“It was nice of you to take him in,” I said, my heart swelled a little at the thought of Gavin caring about someone so much that he would do anything for them. He treated Matt just like he was his normal son, and I never had any reason to doubt that Matt wasn’t his son.
“He’s family,” Gavin said with a shrug,
I wanted to say more, but I wasn’t sure what to say. I wasn’t sure what would be appropriate to say. So, I remained quiet until the car pulled to a stop in front of the villa.
“We should probably wake him so we can get started on his lessons for today,” I said.
Gavin nodded.
I nudged Matt a little and ran my hand down the side of his face; he looked so peaceful when he was sleeping, and I felt bad waking him up. But soon, his eyes fluttered open and he yawned as he lifted his head off my arm to look around the car.
“Are we home?” He asked, blinking a few times to adjust his
eyes.
“Yes,” I answered at the same time as Gavin answered “We are.”
I looked at Gavin and I couldn’t help the warmth that spread across my face.
“Thanks for helping me today,” Matt said as he hugged me. “You were a good mom.”
I blushed even harder now, and the smirk Gavin had on his mouth did not go unnoticed.
“Let’s go inside and get some work done,” I said as I pushed the door open, not wanting to discuss this any further.
I heard Matt’s laughter sounding from behind me.
Third Person POV
“Remind me again why we are preparing all these meals,” Ethan asked as he stared at all the different platters that had been set up by malds.
Irene had been running around all morning like a chicken with her head cut off, making sure everything was clean and cooked perfectly
“Because my cousin Walter is coming to visit from a different country, and he has never been here before! I haven’t seen him since I was a little girl and I’m so excited to meet him again.
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“What country? And How long is he here for?”
“France; and he’s here for a month,” Irene answered. He’s a journalist and he’s working on at worldwide article. He’s looking for the latest scoop and he wanted to start here.”
“So, Walter is your father’s nephew?” Ethan asked.
“Yes,” she replied. “My father has a younger brother and an older sister. He’s the middle child.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...