Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 61
Chapter 0061
I wasn’t surprised to see the familiar luxury car waiting for me outside school when I got done with my final class of the day. Leroy waited for me outside of the car and when I approached, he gave me a polite smile before opening the back door for me.
I frowned at him.
“You have to be careful. If others see you, they will ask questions,” I reminded him.
He dipped his head low, his cheeks reddening.
“I hadn’t thought of that; I apologize, Miss Montague he murmured.
I sighed and slid into the car before anyone spotted me. Leroy shut the door and got into the driver’s seat. The ride to Gavin’s Villa was quiet, but that was fine because it let me truly think about today as a whole. Someone had told the dean about my dyslexia for a reason I wasn’t sure of.
What were they thinking they’d accomplish?
Perhaps they wanted to ruin my reputation? But why?
Leroy stopped the car and got out to open my door. I thanked him and walked into the villa; Adam was standing at the doorway, and he gave me a tight smile as I passed him. I wasn’t sure what his issue with me was, but I just ignored the attitude and found Matt already outside, practicing his aiming.
When he saw me, his face lit up.
“Judy!” He exclaimed as he ran towards me.
I smiled at him, relieved to see the little guy after the day I had. I would be lying if I said I didn’t find my work relaxing in some way. At least Matt respected me and actually listened to me.
“I’ve been practicing my archery,” he told me proudly “Come look!”
He pulled me along with him towards the archery set up and he grabbed an arrow from the quiver along with the bow off the ground.
I watched as he pulled the strings of the bow back and released the arrow; it landed on the archery board almost hitting the target, but not quite. However, it was a lot better than normal. I smiled at the effort and clapped my hands.
“That was a lot better, Matt,” I praised. “Try lowering your shoulders just a little more though and aim slightly upward.”
Matt grabbed another arrow from the quiver and did as I said, he lowered his shoulder and aimed slightly upward. When he released the arrow, it flew thew the air at a rapid speed and the ni heard the thud as it landed directly on the bull’s eye!
Matt cheered and the grin that spread across his face made my heart swell with pride.
“Did you see that!!” He cheered. “I can’t believe I hit the mark!!”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...