Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 58
Chapter 0058
Judy’s POV
“That asshole!” Nan gasped as we stood in line at the campus coffee shop, waiting to take our orders. “I can’t believe he had the nerve to do that to you last night. And to involve your mother??”
It was the next morning after Ethan came to see me and I just finished telling Nan about what had happened last night. I was still in shock that Ethan had the nerve to come to my house and take care of my mother just as I would agree to be his mistress. I felt disgusted over the fact, and I also felt a bit guilty. I felt bad for Irene; she didn’t deserve to be treated like that, even if she didn’t know about it.
“I told him to leave,” I concluded the story with a shrug.
“What can I get for you ladies this morning?” The Barista, Nicole, asked. Nicole was in a couple of my courses, and she was a pretty good fighter. I’ve sparred with her on a couple of different occasions. She worked at the coffee every other morning and she always made my beverages to perfection.
“Just a vanilla cappuccino,” I told her.
“Make that two,” Nan said as she pulled out her wallet
I shook my head and grabbed my own wallet.
“I’ll pay,” I told her. “You got me a coffee last time,” reminded her.
I handed Nicole my card and after the transaction went through, she handed it back.
“Coming right up,” she said, and she turned to make the drinks.
“So, what are you going to do about the whole Ethan situation?” Nan asked as we stepped aside to wait for our cappuccinos.
I looked at her with a frown.
“What can I do?” I asked. “He doesn’t seem to take no for an answer. The most I can do is keep working so I can pay off my father’s debt.”
“Are you going to tell Irene what her fiancé is up to?” Nan asked, raising her brows.
I thought about it for a moment before shaking my head. It wasn’t my business, and Gavin was clear when he said he didn’t want me to do or say anything that would jeopardize this pending marriage. If I was the reason his daughter got hurt, he would never forgive me, and I would be out of a job.
“It’s honestly not my place and I really don’t want to get involved,” I told her.
“Your cappuccinos are all set,” Nicole said, sliding two to–go cups in our direction.
“Thanks,” I said, grabbing both cups and handing one to Nan. “I’ll see you in class later.”
Nicole waved goodbye as we left the coffee shop and started to walk across the campus.
Nan decided not to ask any more questions about what had happened last night and whether or not I should tell Irene. As far as Nan knew, I didn’t know Irene any better than anyone else. The Landry’s have always been locked up tight and though Irene was known to be in the spotlight, she wasn’t known
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...