Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 191
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“Oh, sorry, Dad. I thought you said that session was only moved,” she murmured. “I told her the session had been moved. But when she got here, she said she wasn’t feeling well and then left. That’s all I know…”
Something wasn’t sitting right in the pit of my stomach, but Irene had no reason to lie to me, so I nodded.
“Okay,” I murmured. “Thanks. I’m having dinner with Skyla tonight, so I won’t be home till later.” “Sure, Dad,” Irene said, her eyes lighting up. “Have fun!”
I walked past her and up the stairs so I could get dressed for my dinner. Within the hour, we were ready to go. Skyla changed into a dazzling red dress that hugged her thin body perfectly and amplified her breasts. I knew she was doing it on purpose, but it rubbed me the wrong way.
I texted Judy again before I left and told her that I hoped she felt better and to call if she needed anything. I didn’t mind stopping by with whatever she might need… it went unanswered though which made me worry even more.
I shouldn’t be worried about her like this… it wasn’t in my nature. Yet, I couldn’t seem to get her out of my head, even while I was at dinner with Skyla.
“Alpha Gavin, you seem distracted,” Skyla said, staring at me from across the table. She picked up her wine and took a sip. “Is everything okay?”
“I murmured as I took a sip of my own wine. “I just have a lot on my mind. I’m very busy lately. “I can understand that,” Skyla said, batting her lashes “I’ve been super busy too. It’s nice to get out though and get away from it all. Thank you for taking me to this lovely restaurant. It’s perfect and just what I needed. I’m sure you needed to get out too, being a busy Lycan and all.”
I nodded.
“It is nice to not be doing any work right now,” I lied.
In truth, this was more work than my actual work. But I couldn’t say that to her, so I decided on a lie. She seemed to have bought it because she smiled and relaxed in her seat.
“I’m so glad to hear you say that,” she said softly, reaching over the table and touching my arm gently.” Because I’m hoping we can spend more time together.
I pulled my arm away subtly and leaned back in my seat, taking another sip of wine.
“It’s not often that I have this free time,” I told her. “I’m not sure it would be possible.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...