Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 189
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If Judy wanted to play games, then frene could play ten times better.
“And what does this Judy have that I don’t?” Skyla asked; she had noticed that Gavin barely spared her a second glance and ignored her subtle advances. Now she knew the reasoning behind that… it was because of Judy.
“Nothing.” Irene murmured. “Judy is my age… she’s too young for him. My father deserves a real woman. Not to mention you are way prettier.”
Skyla smiled at that thought. That was perfect; that meant she still had a fighting chance. She wasn’t going to let this Judy girl win Gavin’s heart.
“Skyla, we are waiting for you!” Chanse called to her from the parlor.
“I need to be going,” Skyla told Irene. “But thank you for this helpful information. I’m going to make sure your father chooses the right woman.”
Irene smiled, her plan in motion.
“That’s all I ask,” she said innocently. “I’ll do my part and maybe try and get Judy to walk away as well.”
Skyla nodded; she pegged Irene all wrong. She thought Irene was a spoiled little princess who could do no wrong and had no evil bone in her body. Maybe she was a spoiled little princess… but she was no saint. If things worked out with Skyla and Gavin, she might enjoy being a stepmother to this girl.
She said a hasty goodbye before she retreated and went to the Parlor, pleased to see Gavin already there, She used that opportunity to sit beside him and make her move.
Meanwhile, Irene waited outside the parlor door, knowing that Judy would be here soon. Her father told her to let Judy know that the tutoring session would be moved to a new location for today because of their last–minute meeting. He was busy and wasn’t able to text her himself, so he asked Irene to do it for him. She told him she would, but she didn’t. She wanted Judy to come to the parlor and see Skyla with her father. She wanted her to see what a good couple they made.
Telling from the paling expression on Judy’s face, her plan had worked wonderfully. Now she had it in her head that Gavin was moving on with someone much better than her and it wouldn’t be long before she left.
She didn’t want to break her father’s heart, but she knew Skyla could put the pieces back together. Plus, Gavin was the strongest man that she knew… he wouldn’t let a simple fling weaken him. That’s all Judy was… a fling.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...