Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 183
Chapter 0183
Gavin’s POV
Skyla Sinclair definitely had some timing.
Getting dressed and watching Judy get dressed as well was difficult, especially when I wasn’t able to finish, but there would be time for that later. We would continue where we left off as soon as my workday was done, and I was able to get her into bed. But for right now, I have business to take care of.
The movie film had arrived and were settling into the villa. I wanted to be there when they arrived, but they apparently decided to come early.
“I’m sorry,” I told Judy as I wrapped my arms around her now–dressed waist and pulled her into my
arms.
She smiled up at me and put her hands on my chest as she stood on her tippy toes to kiss me.
“It’s okay. I get that you’re working,” she told me. “I’ll just see you later.”
I nodded and covered her swollen lips with mine, kissing her deeply and passionately before I reluctantly released her. I dropped Judy off at the mansion before I left to go to the villa. When I got there, I saw a couple of cars along with a limo waiting out front. Taylor was waiting by the doorway and when he saw me, he smiled.
“They are inside waiting for you,” he told me. “I showed them to their room and they were able to get settled in while they waited.”
I nodded at him and walked into the villa.
“I’m such a huge fan of yours. I have your posters all over my room. I’m a big idol,” I heard Irene saying, as we neared the parlor.
I sighed; I should have known that Irene would be all over her the moment she arrived. I was going to have to pry my daughter off the movie star before they changed their minds and did their movie elsewhere.
I opened the parlor door and paused at the doorway. There were a couple of security guards that I didn’t recognize in the corner, along with my own guards. On the couch, there were a couple of good–looking women and some pretty good–looking men as well. There was an older man who was standing nearby as well, and he was speaking with one of the officers; they looked to be in deep conversation.
I knew him from the pictures that he was Chanse Wellington. I knew that the women and men on the couch were a few of the movie stars that were going to be in this film. The one Irene was speaking to was the shorter of the punch and she was probably the better looking of them all. I knew that had to be Skyla
Sinclaire.
She was listening to Irene babble, and she looked like she was waiting for an excuse to end this conversation. An escape I was just about to give her.
“Irene, give her space,” I said, folding my arms across my chest.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...