Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 176
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I took a bite of the eggs and smiled at the deliciousness.
“This is really good,” I told him.
“It’s not hard to make eggs,” he teased. “By the way, you still haven’t sent Harper your favorite food list. You can always give it to me, so I know what to make for future meals.”
I nodded.
“Honestly, I’m not picky. You can literally make anything, and I’ll eat it,” I told him.
“It’d make me feel better if I made your favorites though.”
I shrugged.
“Everything is my favorite,” I assured him. “So, do you live here too?”
“Yes,” he answered. “I’m here 24/7, so if you ever need a late–night snack…” he trailed off suggestively, I knew he was joking because he had a twinkle of humor in his eyes. I’m sure everybody in this mansion knew about my relationship with Gavin by now. I felt like it was quite obvious. “But seriously, ever need food or something late at night, I’m your guy.”
“I’ll keep that in mind,” I said, taking another bite of the food.
“All of the staff here live in the quarters on the main floor,” he continued to explain.
I nodded.
“And your quarters are decent?” I asked him; the thought of them living anywhere remotely like the servants in the Cash manor made my stomach twist. I hoped their living situation wasn’t like that.
He nodded.
“Better than my apartment before I got this job,” he told me. “I love it here; a lot of space, private bathroom, gorgeous views, I get to do what I love, and I’m paid well. We are all paid well. I’ve been told our rooms aren’t much different than the ones upstairs. But obviously, some are bigger than others.”
I nodded thoughtfully.
“And Gavin treats you well?” I asked him, biting my lower lip.
Chester raised his brows at me, and he studied me for a moment before answering.
“Well, yeah,” he said with a shrug. “When he’s here. He’s not always here. It’s nice to have someone to cook for consistently. However, a couple of times a week, he has me cooking for large gatherings or for his charity house, so I always have a job to do when I’m not cooking for him personally. But now I get to cook for you, and I’d like to do that well. So, please… send me a list of your favorites.”
I laughed.
“Will do,” I assured him.
We fell into a comfortable conversation while I ate and I could tell from the small interaction I had with
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...