Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 159
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Chapter 0159
I shrugged and chewed the inside of my cheek.
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“I don’t think she really notices how bad things are for me,” I admitted. “When I tried to talk to her about it, she told me that I need to be grateful to the Cash family and I shouldn’t complain too much.”
Nan rolled her eyes.
“She’s completely blind,” she murmured.
“Her mate is in prison. She’s allowed to be blind. I just want her to be okay,” I sighed. “If anything were to happen to her… if they treated her like they treat me..
Tears spilled down my cheeks before I could stop them, and I quickly wiped them away before anyone
else saw.
“It’s not fair to you…” she murmured. “Have you eaten? You look like you’ve lost a ton of weight.”
I bit my lip; I’ve barely eaten these last couple of days. Mostly because the food the servants eat isn’t edible, but also because I haven’t had an appetite.
“I’m fine,” Nan,” I assured her.
I glanced at the time and sighed.
“I should go,” I told her. “I don’t want to be too late tonight.
“Make sure you get some schoolwork in,” she told me as I walked towards the parking lot.
I waved at her over my shoulder. I already called an Uber, and I knew it would arrive at any minute, but I wasn’t expecting to see the familiar luxury car out front. I frowned as the window rolled down and I saw Beta Taylor in the driver’s seat.
“Taylor?” I asked, my brows furrowed. “What are you doing here?”
“I have some news for you,” he told me.
I sighed and stepped away from the car.
“If Gavin knew you were here, you’d probably get in trouble,” I warned him.
“He’s the one who sent me,” he surprised me by saying. “He had important work to do at his villa and couldn’t come himself but-”
“Isn’t that rich,” I muttered, folding my arms across my chest.
My Uber pulled up and I motioned for him to wait a moment after he honked once, alerting me of his arrival.
“I have to go,” I told Taylor just as I spun on my heal and walked away.
1 heard Taylor quickly getting out of the car and rushing towards me.
“Wait, Judy. Please, listen to me for a minute,” he pleaded. I had nothing to say to him and I doubted
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...