Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 139
Chapter 0139
“He’s a ruthless Alpha,” my mother warned. “He’s a Lycan chairman, and very powerful. Be careful around him. Make sure to show him respect.”
I nodded.
My mother finished cleaning our mess in the bathroom before she turned and walked out, leaving me alone with my thoughts. I stared at myself in the mirror, my heart heavy in my chest. I was just about to walk out of the bathroom after a bit of staying behind, but the door opened before I could touch the knob.
I froze when I saw Gavin standing in front of me.
“W… what are you doing in here?” I asked him in a hushed whisper. He made his way into the bathroom. and shut the door behind him, saying nothing in response. “Gavin-“I tried again, but he stopped me as he pushed me against the counter and covered my lips with his.
His kiss was warm and tender, sending my heart into complete turmoil to the point where I thought it was going to beat out of my chest. I sighed contently at the feeling of him pressing against me; It felt as if my entire body was on fire. Our lips moved together in perfect harmony and when I felt him nipping
bottom lip with his teeth, I couldn’t help but let out a little moan.
at my
Remembering where we were, I put my hand on his chest and gave him a small push.
“Gavin, we can’t do this here,” I told him breathlessly. He let out a small growl as he pressed his forehead against mine.
“Then let’s get out of here,” he murmured.
I smiled at his eagerness, but I also felt a bit sad knowing that I had to stay for a little longer. I was no longer there for Irene; I was there for my mother. I had to make sure she was okay and that they weren’t going to make her feel bad about her situation.
“I can’t just yet,” I whispered. “I don’t trust them with my mother.”
He pulled back slightly, and his frown deepened.
“Have they always treated you like this?”
I bit my lip, but I nodded.
“They never liked me,” I murmured,
“They have no right to treat you in that kind of way. I’ll make sure it never happens again,” he said, his aura darkening.
I smiled at him; I liked that he was protective, but it was going to get us both into trouble if he wasn’t
careful.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...