Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 131
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How stupid she was for trusting them. A furlous rage and pit of Jealousy bubbled in her stomach. She bit her lip, keeping her tears away. She watched as her father noticed what was happening and he stormed over to them, pulling Ethan off Judy and punching him in the stomach.
Irene wanted to go to Ethan to make sure he was okay but she couldn’t bring herself to move. She was frozen in place, unable to take her eyes off the man she fell so desperately in love with.
She was so wrapped up staring at Ethan that she barely noticed when Judy walked back into the house.
“Irene…”
“Judy breathed. “I didn’t know you were here…”
“Um… hello Judy,” Irene said with a tight–lipped smil. “I was just looking for Ethan. Have you seen him?”
Judy glanced over her shoulder out the door and then turned back to Irene with her own fake smile.
“I think he’s speaking with your father,” she said, looking a bit awkward. “Is everything okay?”
Irene stared at her for a moment; she thought Judy was her friend. How wrong was she? Was she really going to look her in the eyes and lie to her? She desperately wanted to know what was going on between Judy and her fiancé. Her heart was aching at the very thought and it took everything she had not to burst
into tears.
She had given up so much for Ethan, including her dignity. She made such a fuss about being with him and made herself look foolish in front of her father. Now it seemed as if it was crumbling down around her and there was nothing, she could do about it.
“Yeah,” Irene lied, forcing another smile, feeling helpless and more alone than ever. “I’m fine… um… Ethan’s family is having their annual barbeque tomorrow night. I’m a little nervous about it. I never met them before.”
Judy nodded, looking a bit uneasy.
“They are an interesting bunch. They never liked me, Judy admitted, gaining Irene’s attention. “But my family goes to their barbeque every year.
A light bulb went off in Irene’s head. Maybe if Irene could impress Ethan’s family and make them like her better than they like Judy, then Ethan would see that Irene is the right choice for him and he could finally leave Judy alone! But she needed Judy to be there so Ethan could see the comparison.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...