Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 120
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When I didn’t say anything in return, Walter got the fint and walked around me to rejoin Judy and the others. I stood frozen, silently fuming. Then, I felt a land on the back of my shoulder. I turned to see Daisy standing behind me with a soft smile on her lips. She had a golden shimmering dress that hugged her curves nicely and her breasts were fully on display. She wore a golden mask with silver features, but I knew it was her almost immediately.
“I’m glad you made it,” she said, her smile growing while. “Buy me a drink.”
It wasn’t a question, but an order. I raised my brows at her and she just batted her lashes in my direction.
With a sigh, I asked, “And what would you like to drink?”
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“Champaign,” she said eagerly.
I went to the bartender and ordered two glasses of Champaign. I handed one to Daisy.
“You look handsome tonight, Gavin. I see you didn’t bring a date this evening,” she pointed out.
“You know I don’t usually bring dates to these types of things,” I reminded her.
She nodded thoughtfully as she took a sip of her wine
“What about that girl you were seeing? Judy was her name?”
“That’s not your concern,” I said through my teeth.
“This probably wouldn’t be her scene anyway,” she said with a light laugh. “I couldn’t imagine someone as common as her being here.‘”
“That’s enough,” I said, as I drank the rest of my champagne and started to walk away. She grabbed my arm, stopping me.
“I meant no offense,” she said, her brows knitted together. “But you deserve someone more in your league. I’m a heiress and we would be so good together”
When I didn’t say anything, she took that as her opportunity to step closer to me.
“Dance with me,” she practically purred.
I was ready to decline her when my eyes caught sight of Judy on the dance floor, wrapped in Walter’s arms. She looked content with her body pressed close against his. I pressed my lips together and turned back to Daisy, nodding at her.
I took her hand and escorted her to the dance floor; she eagerly followed my lead. She wrapped her arms around my neck and pressed her body close to mine. As we danced, I couldn’t help but look in Judy’s direction. How could she let this man touch her after what we had done the other night? She truly did have no shame.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...