Chapter 214
Jasmine ran excitedly towards Charlene, her little hand raised for a high–five. “Mom, we did it! We won!”
Charlene grinned, giving her daughter a high–five. “Yeah, we sure did.”
Thorne walked over, a smile playing on his lips. “Did you get it all on camera?”
“Yep,” Charlene replied, sending the video to him with a quick tap on her phone.
After the thrill of musical chairs, it was time to tackle the next adventure: the unstoppable wheel of fun.
The rules were simple: four families formed a team, each member stepping and spinning the hula hoop tape as they moved forward. The first team to reach the finish line would claim victory.
Thorne turned to Charlene. “You want to join this round?”
Jasmine nodded eagerly. “Yeah, Mom, come with me!”
Charlene was game. “Sure thing.”
As the game was about to start, Charlene glanced at her purse. She hesitated for a moment before Thorne reached out his hand. “I can hold that for you.”
“…Thanks,” Charlene said, handing it over.
For many couples, a husband carrying his wife’s bag was pretty common. But for them, this was the first time Thorne had ever held her purse.
Charlene wondered if he’d ever carried a bag for Vesta.
Today, Thorne wasn’t dressed as formally as usual, but with his straight black coat, he somehow looked perfectly natural holding her purse, as if he were waiting for his beloved to return.
Charlene quickly looked away.
This game was all about teamwork and coordination.
Charlene stood in the middle, matching the rhythm of those ahead as she lifted her arms to spin the tape.
Jasmine clung to the hem of her mom’s sweater, following along and having the time of her life.
When she noticed Thorne filming them with his phone, her laughter grew louder. “Dad!”
Thorne stood slightly in front of them, and though Charlene was aware of his presence, she focused on the game, avoiding looking directly at him.
She heard Jasmine’s voice trail off, followed by Thorne’s calm instruction from the side. “Keep your eyes on your mom and stay in sync.”
Jasmine replied with a cheerful, “Got it!”
Earlier, when Charlene filmed Thorne and Jasmine, she stood still, capturing footage without following their
game movements.
But Thorne, recording Charlene and Jasmine, moved backward with them, keeping pace with their game.
After a back–and–forth, the game concluded.
> Jasmine dashed over to Thorne. “Dad, that was so fun! Can we do it again sometime?”
Thorne smiled. “Absolutely.”
Charlene returned and took her purse from Thorne’s hand.
st then, she heard the familiar ping of a message notification from her phone.
Reaching into her purse, she found that Thorne had sent her a video.”
09-14
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The readers' comments on the novel: Unknown Divorce Revelation Beyond Time (Charlene and Thorne)
Enough already. This novel is dragging slowly. Updated with 2 chapters only. REALLY!!! Whoever the author or authors of this novel why is there a delay in penning more chapters? Here’s my question. In reading the comments from others does their opinions matters and/or make a difference? Are comments being monitored? Or is it only a tool allowing readers to blow off steam?...
Long wait to just get an upload of a couple of chapters. Very little progress in the story if any at all! For heaven's sake the story is 453 chapters so far with nothing or little change from where the story began! Show commitment to us your readers and followers please!...
Hi..its my 1st ever time commenting on any story. But seriously....i dont mean to come as rude but are u seriously thinking about the stroy or losing ur grip on the plot and characters...not updating...no story development...no commitment towards ur readers...u just uploaded 2 chapters after god know how long and still nothing to give to the story..if u dont want to write or simply cant then please dont...
The updates are so slow that I forgot the story for some time and just remembered it and read 20 chapters. The chapters are short and the story development is like a snail. 451 chapters and Charlene still couldn't break her image in other's eyes or dealth some serious damage to Vesta and her trash father....
It would be better to say right away that there are 10 chap/month...
Just give us updates already...
We're stuck at this chapter for over 2wks now Very annoying Thorne and vesta having the tune of their lives while Charlene is stuck More annoying...
Updating chapters to this novel is reminiscent of a sloth. There should be a disclaimer when this site states PUBLISH 10 chaps/day....
Seriously speaking story seems to loosing its grip.. no point in dragging.. it would be better if story gets wrapped within 600 chapters.....
Dragging and no real story. Mistress is having gala time and getting all attention and poor wife is getting neglected. The story is stuck and not moving...forget about the divorce let alone husband regretting. Boring book...