His Unveiled Passion novel Chapter 428
Quentin wasn't all that brave. So, he would usually avoid any adrenaline-inducing rides at the amusement park.
Naomi chose to sit in the front row, which was the most exciting seat on the roller coaster.
Tessa went to the second row, wisely leaving the seat next to Naomi for Quentin.
Stephen immediately sat next to Tessa. "Tess, are you nervous?"
" A little," she admitted.
Stephen reached over and held her hand in his. "It's alright. I'm here."
Tessa felt her heart flutter at his gesture. She didn't pull her hand away from his.
The roller coaster had barely moved an inch when Quentin started screaming for dear life.
In juxtaposition, Naomi was as calm as a lake. She rolled her eyes at him and mocked, "Why bother joining us when you're so scared? Aren't you just asking for it?"
Quentin blurted, "I did it because you like rides like these. Otherwise, I wouldn't—" A screech clawed out of his throat before he could finish his sentence. The roller coaster had sped up whilst he was talking.
Naomi also let out a yell now that the fun had truly begun.
Unlike Quentin's terrified shrieking, Naomi was howling with glee.
Stephen remained unfazed as he held Tessa's hand tightly. Although this was his first time on a roller coaster, he wasn't the slightest bit afraid.
Tessa's screams wormed into his ears alongside the rush of wind blowing past his hair.
Stephen's grip on her hand tightened, silently accompanying her.
After the ride, Quentin wobbled over to the nearest trash can to throw up.
Naomi stood right beside him, patting his back in comfort as she offered him a bottle of water. "You're really bad at this. Are you seriously going to keep this up?"
Quentin's face was drained of all color from the fright.
Sienna was busy stifling her giggles, thinking, "Look at them acting like a couple. My plan worked out splendidly."
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: His Unveiled Passion
Why make an uninteresting, irrelevant twist when readers are waiting for Tess and Stephen to be together?...
Gosh just let Tessa and Stephen get back together already! Ugh...
Oh my god, when is this book finishing... they're not even back together yet and more nonsense side plots.....
Whoa! Hahahahahaha! Go, Sophia! Burn, stupid Rowena! Lol...
Sooo~ Chapters 310-318 were just a repeat of Jacqueline’s punishment, official expulsion from the Jacobson family, and arrest. With few changes since Tessa and Stephen are not together this time. So Tessa didn’t witness how Jacqueline was tortured at Stephen’s base, though at least Tessa was still called over and witnessed how Stephen officially expelled Jacqueline from the Jacobson family and how Stephen’s subordinate made Jacqueline grovel in front of Tessa. Lol. I hope Jacqueline’s really out of the story now....
Also a lot of chapters were missing here. I went back to the application where it was originally published that’s why i know that this site is not reliable...
Fucked up book! Seems like the authors were not talking to each other. LOL. Yes authors, because of the inconsistencies....
The story went downhill after pg200 1. Why is Jacqueline back… she was expelled from the family already 2. There was no reason for Rowena to be mad at Tessa 3. The Jacobson already knows that Stephen wants to get back witb Tessa after they deal with James, so why is Rowena pushing hard? LOL 4. The family also knows that Stephen and Nancy have some sort of deal. The story was okay from page 1-199, but clearly it’s a thumbs down. I can deal with grammatical errors, but story errors is just different now....
This is funny! Jacqueline was also the culprit why James knew that nancy was Stephen's cousin. So, really, what happened when steohen tortured jacqueline hahah...
I wonder how many authors does this book have? Suddenly jacqueline was back and continue to bad mouth tessa. And was stunned that tessa knows her feelings about stephen. And then rowena was freaking mad at tessa too; because there werw multiple instances that tessa sharp-tongued her. 🤣...